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Always On My Mind?
4 April, 2003
Author: Christian V

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when i go to sleep
and close my eyes
your always on my mind
when i fall in my dream
and see your smile
your always on my mind
when I gaze at stars
them shining in my eyes
your always on my mind
but then when i see you
walkin down the street
your walkin towards me
my mind goes blank
i lose all words
because i'm lost in your beautiful eyes
i dont know what to say
because your always on my mind
i try to say i love you
but the words wont come out
almost to late
what to say
my mind still blank
lost in thought
wait tha words come out
you hear them
you look at me
i stare at you
i move closer kissin you gently
now i know why your always on my mind
i love and care for you
i hope that i can always be on your mind
because your always on mine

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Christian V. (66.143.168.42) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 04:21 am

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i wrote this poem when i was thinkin bout this one girl i kinda care bout.hope ya'll like it. and jus so everyone know, theres been people that have tried to steal this poem and claim it as theirs. but i wrote this so dont no one try to steal it.
c.r. (208.254.109.22) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 06:12 pm

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cute poem, i like it. it reminds me of "my love"!
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 01:38 am

I Like this but......

It is a wonderful poem but why is there a question mark at the end of the title? She must be on your mind and no questions asked. Nice writing!
 
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