Author: Alan


You were born an angel that i can see,
but was it for someone other than me,
So many times i cried late into the night,
but just the picture of you would make it all right.

Your heavenly glow so bright and so pure,
was it a trap was it a lure,
falling for you you helped pick me up,
gave me a drink from lifes cup.

No words were needed from your heavenly lips,
i raised up that cup and took a few sips,
your eyes they sparkled like stars in the night,
that out of this world smile shone so bright.

Dressed all in white, your halo aglow,
i had nothing to fear that you did show,
such a perfect pretty Angel that you became,
i was so mesmerized i forgot your name.

Was i dreaming or were you really there,
such a beautiful sight is indeed very rare,
my Angel my Sweet Dove from above,
all i can say is thankyou for your love.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney ( -- Sunday, April 3 2005, 06:29 pm


That was such a beautiful poem. That was so awesome. I really can't describe how lovley it was. Every word was just amazing!!!!!!!! ~Britney~
Alan ( -- Monday, April 4 2005, 09:49 am

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Thankyou Britney,i appreciate the comments and i love your work too, Alan
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