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I Feel Like...
Author: Terrie*

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i feel like a raging fire
unable to be put out
i feel like the falling rain
not wanting to stop

i feel like the wave in the ocean
with nowhere to go
i feel like a tear
that never dries out

i feel like a bird
so afraid to fly
i feel like the sun
refusing to shine
i feel like the moon
with no passion to glow

i feel like the stars
that hide beneath the sky
i feel like the sky
that shares a gloomy day
i feel like a child
so lost without her mom

i feel like the pain
that sets in a heart
and clings on
till your heart gets ripped apart

i feel like an emotion
that has no idea how to feel

i feel like a memory
trying not to forget
i feel like a hole
has been blasted through my heart
when my tears start pouring out

i feel so lost
without my dear sister close by

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (172.16.1.231) -- Tuesday, April 5 2005, 05:42 pm

superb!

This was a very good creation you have made in honor to your sister. I kinda don't know what to do without my sisters.....! well i hope you'll see your sister and have the brightest smile going threw your heart! ~Britney~
Terrie* (65.148.208.251) -- Sunday, May 1 2005, 09:57 am

Britney,

my head must of been stuck in a cloud somewhere (giggle) i've finally fallen and knocked some sense in my head ..yea i hope i can have her in my life for a long long time,thanx Brit, you know how much your words mean.
 
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