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Another Girl
Author: Christina

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I'm trying to vent
and explain how I feel
I keep thinking about what happened,
wondering if it was real

A number on your hand,
wasn't it someone from work?
Nope, just another girl's,
you stupid lying jerk

Cancelling a date with me,
Sorry, you said, I already have plans
But not with a friend, just another girl
kissing and holding hands

I can't kiss you now, you said,
it just doesn't feel right
Not because of some "moral issue",
you were with another girl that night

Little hints along the way
led to one conclusion-
I would end up in pain,
and in total confusion

Someone out there knows how I feel
I say, things aren't what they seem
I turned out to be just another girl,
falling victim to a stupid dream

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Comments on this poem/writing:

ASh (63.53.113.70) -- Thursday, January 15 2004, 02:16 am

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I really liked this poem. Sry u had to go thru this.
Tarna (66.72.30.139) -- Friday, January 16 2004, 06:29 am

again..

I can feel the anger. The disgust of this persons actions through your poetic words.. Good Job... True passion.. (Just not the kind your heart had been looking for I'm afraid.) Tarna
Lady Eryemil (64.12.96.204) -- Sunday, January 18 2004, 05:04 pm

^_^

So true dear Tarna, But the trial and error will make it all the sweeter when you actually find the right person.
Christina (152.163.253.6) -- Thursday, January 22 2004, 12:37 am

Thank you

Ash, Tarna, Lady Eryemil...thank you for your comments. It hurts to fall in love with someone that has completely different intentions. But without pain and sadness, you can never know love and happiness.
the #1 girl (208.31.154.102) -- Wednesday, September 29 2004, 07:17 pm

Zuriel?

Zuriel???
hailey (67.190.238.141) -- Saturday, September 3 2005, 02:55 am

omg i hope he dies

ur poem was great and if you went threw this...i am so sorry because no one dessurves that....i hope all guys like that die or one day they know how it feels....loved the poem keep at it!
 
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