Thunder And The Lightning
Author: Alan


Thunder in the distant sky,
rolling it's way to me,
sitting watching lightning,
i have the best view free

Rolling ever closer,
a pretty awesome sight to see,
the force of it is frightning,
free lightshow it's for me

Wrapped up inside my blanket,
wih the best seat out in front,
watching it get louder,
its noise so vibrant.

Lighting up the dark sky,
picture this you must,
lightning bolts throwing spasms,
onto earths old crust.

The thunder and the lightning,
brings tranquility to me,
sending out a calming,
thrilling me to see.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* ( -- Tuesday, April 5 2005, 03:24 pm

oh what a surge...they give us...

ya got me with this one..i just love a good thunder storm...and a peaceful flash of lightening...and running through the rain..AWWWWW...feels so goooooood....(sight) they are so romantic...i the way they cleanse my soul...written a few myself.....about thunder and lightening ...thanx for this great piece ..Terrie*
Britney ( -- Wednesday, April 6 2005, 05:30 pm

It was nice

but i'm scarred of thunder and lightning lol. it's ugh. But it was a good write you made!!! ~Britney~
Alan ( -- Friday, April 8 2005, 08:49 pm


oh there's no need to be afraid of lightning,this is truly one of natures better miracles and watched in safety it is a most magical and wonderful thing to see,thunder is the lightnings background music so to speak. So if you afraid come here and ill keep you safe lol
Britney ( -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 06:52 pm


Thanks lol. its still scurry. i mean when it thunders its always right underneath my house never fails so yeah... but anyways great poem. ~Britney~
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