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Another London Day
Author: Taylor James

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Morning I said with one open and one eye closed,
Back under the sheets I go
When im yawning
Toast is burning
Orange juice is pouring into the flow

Dogs are barking
Children are screaming
Only one week to go

Brush my teeth
Wash my face
Going into the unknown

Kids begging
For 1 more pound
Greediness is what they’ve found

The sun is shining
Yet snow is pouring
What a typical London day

------- Author's Notes -------

i did this in an english lesson hope yall like it
>>>taylor

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.203) -- Friday, April 8 2005, 04:25 pm

Uncle Arthur's Bedtime Stories

Your poem reminds me of a story in that book. Have you ever heard of Uncle Arthur's? The story is similar, the children imploring, in this case, instead of the dog barking, the chickens are squawking and so forth. You could write chapter after chapter of this. This must be the introduction, because your fingers are on fire, when you typed this, it's just that GOOD!
---Meri
Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 12:57 pm

hi meri

hey, no i havent ever read that book but i have written a couple more like this but i dont think they are good enough to put on this site,thaks for the commont meri nuf luv and respect *Taylor*
 
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