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Confused
8 April, 2005
Author: Shy Surfer

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Why do you do this to me
You smile and it gives me chills
When you press your smile against your shoulder
I try to hide my feelings
But I can't hold it in much longer
I try and fight it with all my might
It is too hard...
These feelings towards you...
They can't stay in much longer
I must tell you how i feel
It will eat away my inside until then
Please just listen...
You might not want to hear it
But it is how I feel
You might not care
But it is how I feel
Please just listen...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

annie (4.235.114.130) -- Friday, April 8 2005, 09:46 pm

omg

hey i read this poem and just have to say grr for which ever one of us gurls ur talking bout but its probably me!
annie (4.235.126.237) -- Sunday, April 10 2005, 02:31 am

i have another comment!

u are so weird and confusing! but we all still care bout u lotz!
rose (71.246.252.36) -- Sunday, March 5 2006, 07:32 pm

speechless

wow..i love how u expressed what most ppl feel when they want tell the person they love or care about how they feel.
marie (205.188.117.65) -- Thursday, March 23 2006, 05:26 pm

aww

hey i loved it it was so sweet.
Dija Abernathy (70.248.1.3) -- Thursday, September 14 2006, 08:13 am

I know

What you wrote is just like what im going through, but my problem is i cant find a way to tell the person i like how i feel in fear of how this person will react, i hide my feelings so well i feel that he will never know the depths of my feelings and that i will stand on the sidelines hurting and he will never know, it's true love hurts. Even if its just like.
Tianna (24.180.124.225) -- Saturday, December 16 2006, 05:10 am

I LOVE IT

Aaron this is a very good poem. i loved it
susan (70.53.97.52) -- Tuesday, June 19 2007, 07:32 pm

may i

i was wondering if i could use your poem to show my boyfriend of 6 years which is becoming rocky
 
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