River On My Wall
10 April, 2005
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)
I sit and gaze at the river on my wall
The silence humming in my ears
Everything is as it should be
Yet I feel, for some reason, discontent
It's like something is missing
Though everything is perfect
Like the painting on the wall
Full of color and tranquil
I know I should feel happy
I know I should enjoy the peace
But for some reason, something's missing
Ah! I know.. It's You!
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Terrie* (188.8.131.52) -- Sunday, April 10 2005, 08:10 pm|
we all are like passing clouds we make an entrance/exit w/a storm or we quietly move on ...
all lifes are affected..human presence warms the heart..this was a true beauty... reflected from your inner soul...thanx for sharin' that part of your heart...Terrie*
|Meridian (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 06:48 pm|
Dreamer! Darn good poem! Searching for the missing, reaching out for the unreachable---it's like trying to find pieces to fit a complex puzzle. Like always, absolutely remarkable poem!
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