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Blue Tit
Author: Ben Franklin

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Little bird of beauty,
God's treasure,
isnt it amazing how a blue tit
can give you so much pleasure?

So small and timid towards
its surroundings,
when it sings it does not know
how beutiful it is sounding,

A wonderful colour of blue and green,
a gift from God that has been sent down for all
to see,

Performing its magic right in front of you,
then gone in a twinkle of an eye,
flying of with the rest of gods wonders in the big blue sky,

Bird of beauty,
gods treasure,
isnt it amazing how a blue tit
can give you so much pleasure?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.94.248) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 02:16 am

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That was a pretty poem. Great job. ~Britney~
Ben f (81.100.175.132) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 08:52 am

thank

Thank you britney.Blue tits are my fav of the bird family,so small and innocent. We have two that never leave each others site in our garden and its so lovely to watch.
thanks for reading.
Ben
Meridian (172.150.35.197) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 03:34 pm

I have to admit

My mind was in the gutter when I read your title under 'New Submission this week'. Thought your poem meant something else. *laughs* But you're into the robins, and woodpeckers, and other birds of prey eh? That's refreshing! Brill poem B!
---Meri
Ben f (81.100.175.132) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 07:58 pm

ha!

Lol meri,I can see in a way how it could be misleading :) I love the birds!take care smelly!
Ben
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Terrie* (65.135.87.16) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 11:39 pm

Hi Ben, lovely picture perfect treasure...

oh i just love the little featherd darlin's..wanna make me happy on a date..'aye after a storm give me your best picture window in the house w/a warm cup of tea...and let me sit back and passionately enjoy the show that our lovely feathered friends put on for us as thy glide so gracefully in motion..like children at play..'aye i'm high maintenance when it comes to the heart BUT....so very easy to please...this is sooooo beautiful...ya cornered me ;) Terrie*
Ben f (81.100.175.132) -- Wednesday, April 13 2005, 08:30 am

Terrie*

hey Terrie*,its been very nice here in the uk the last few days,so i took adavantage and sat outside with my jasmine tea and just watched what they did,so human like you wouldnt belive!they are such a joy to watch!thanks for reading!
take care
Ben
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