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My Soul Searching For You
11 April, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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as I lay there
trying to go to sleep,
all night long

I find myself,
my heart ,
my soul searching for you..
all night long

I snuggle up to a pillow

all night long
I imagine
that it is you
that lies next to me
cuddled up against my bare flesh

when I wake up
I hug my pillow
that brought me comfort
all night long

as it caught all my tears
when no one laid besides me
all night long

------- Author's Notes -------

all night long is a long night

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (71.33.43.23) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 02:27 am

A loving side

Your love knows no bounds,
your thoughts follow your dreams,
Your words capture our minds,
Terrie you write as always with a passion to share.
Terrie* (65.54.97.190) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 03:37 am

Hi Clive,

i read the revised one..i like it a whole lot better than the original..from where it was given birth......you gave it life....to all those we write for i hope they too enjoy..
thanx once again for adding life to my words.....your Awesome!..Terrie*
Clive (71.33.43.23) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 04:15 am

We two

Can give life to any word, to make that word a sentance and grow even still.
hugs to you my friend
Terrie* (65.135.87.55) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 04:10 pm

'Aye Clive,....yes we most certainly can....

give life and passion to any word..yet i must step back a bit and give you the credit here....considerin' what i you had to work with...as all can read here ..kinda bland yet ..yes sincere...still when it is read in your re-write..it captures what we really want a heart to feel...
hugs back at ya......Terrie*
 
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