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My Heart, Is Reaching Out
12 April, 2005
Author: ShyHeart

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I have been the problem of my life, now, I see, if, I reach out
The promise is, someone will hear my cry, save me, from, myself
Let me feel a heart, that for the first time, cries and needs me
I have been wrong so, many times, I reach out for a heart, that needs me

This is the first time, I reached out, from my selfish shell
I need someone, to save me from myself, I'm full of love
Yet, I have no where to go, I am the reason, for no place to go
Still, my heart is reaching out, searching for, Love.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (216.123.56.214) -- Thursday, April 14 2005, 01:29 am

feel sad

your writing Martin is clear of what you want.Good writing but the love you need is not just in a mate a friend a pet or an aquaintance can give love too. remember love is not lust.:)))
Martin Vann (63.25.167.96) -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 06:16 pm

Love & Lust, two different things.

Barb,

Very accurate interpretaion and I apprciate and understand, the comment.

Thank You,
MV
 
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