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Let Me Have My Say
Author: Taylor James

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why when you say somthing,
no-one seems to care,
but as soon as i say somthing back,
you frown strop and stare?

I am only joking what cant you see?
that words from you to me
"you dont really mean"
but words from me to you,
you just cant believe.

you need to understand
you cant always win
and that others have things to say,
its not only you.

when you read this you should think,
am i really like that?
but now you see you will think,
that that poem is bad, and all about you.
well you got one thing right,
it is about you.

but this poem is trying yo make you see im not a fool.
i know how you behave, but i dont think you do.

you can say things to me but i cant say them to you.
you are my friend but what dont you get?
i need my say2 and its not only you.
dont try to rule my life as that just wont do.

dont let this effect us,
as i only want my say.

i could go on forever but ill end like this,
i love you like my sister
but please hear this;
dont try to rule my life as it just wont take
just let me make the mistakes
so i can learn.

------- Author's Notes -------

the person knows who its about but i jus wana say this, somtimes you treat me like im your son, but im not im 16 years old with my own mind and body, i dont need a mum as i already have one,please dont try to become mine. please dont let this poem effect us but i had to get it off my chest without swearing :P and i didnt want to offend you.but from now on let me have my say!! your not my mum. anyways love you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

anonymous (81.157.218.48) -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 10:32 am

dudeeeee

Well even before I read this I did decide to let you make mistakes without me telling you not to do them.And well you complain sometimes about your mum so I guess I took charge :p Glad you wrote these thoughts down as I know if you where to tell me them,we would end up swearing at each other,but thatís because we love each other :p lol.Love you loads...your twice-removed-half sis,LOL x
Britney (67.136.93.53) -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 10:38 pm

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Great poem. Greatly said! ~Britney~
Mike (82.35.244.198) -- Thursday, April 21 2005, 11:02 am

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It's good that you two sorted this out without it getting in the way of your friendship. I'm glad of that.
 
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