Ive Never Felt So Alone
Author: Taylor James
Ive never felt so lonely
in a room filled with friends,
Ive never felt so cold
in a room filled with heat,
Ive never heard so little
in a room filled with noise
The point im trying to make
is dont leave me all alone.
------- Author's Notes -------
short but i think the message gets accross.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Terrie* (184.108.40.206) -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 09:13 pm|
Hi Taylor.....sad when one can feel the loneliness more.... when they have someone in their life ...than when there was no body in it before.. great read..Terrie*
|Seizure (220.127.116.11) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 04:13 am|
I can relate to it... especially as of late. I think it was well worded.
|Taylor James (18.104.22.168) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 08:46 pm|
hey terrie* and seizure thnk you for your comments i know its a kinda short poem but i think i managed to get what i was feek#ling acroos,and your right loneliness does open ur heart to reality. thanks 4 the comments nuf love *taylor*
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