Smell The Cold
Author: Mental


dark sunset
unusually sweet
smell the cold
inside is the heat.
those nights
exposed the desire
my teenage imagination
my young mind split the fire.


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Angel in Tears ( -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 11:44 am

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Love this poem!
Mike ( -- Thursday, April 21 2005, 11:40 am


I've read a number of your poems, and I've noticed that quite a few are related to times in the day, such as sunset, sunrise, morning etc. You also use 'cold words' a lot in your poems. I love the effect that these words give your poems. Congratulations on creating these marvellous poems.
rage ( -- Friday, March 7 2014, 02:44 am

so young

so young and wild and free. that one girl. mmmm
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