Fantasy Love
Author: Christina L Pineda


You changed my life in such a dramatic way,
to the extent that to my heart I cannot explain.
You wrapped your hands around mine
as I foolishly awaited for some sort of sign.
You mellowed me with poems and kisses on our cheeks,
we ended up in love and kisses now on our lips.
In a blink of an eye I was swept off my feet but
alas these broken hearts have rendered to their defeat.
Was it love? Was it lust?
This plays on my mind from dawn til dusk.


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Lady Eryemil ( -- Sunday, January 18 2004, 04:10 pm


Love or lust, sometimes they do seem to be the same thing, but not quite, your poem sounds like love to me.
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