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Take It All
20 April, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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take my heart
hold it close
as close as i hold yours
take my love
take it all
as i've taken yours
wipe these tears
completely dry
with the touch
of your warm embrace
sing me a song
let me hear
the voice of your heart
wrap the arms of your heart
snuggly against mine
as i fuse mine gently upon yours
let our love
flow so deep
in our heart
love we will forever reap

------- Author's Notes -------

love we sow...love matures..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.93.53) -- Wednesday, April 20 2005, 05:03 am

Hello

Great poem!!! Keep it UP! On a roll with such amazing poetry! Thank you so much for that beatiful poem in my recoginiton. I'll write one about you soon...till then nice poems. ~Britney~
Terrie* (65.148.232.47) -- Wednesday, April 20 2005, 06:05 am

Lil' Britney,

sweetie your comments are always so sweet and warm..your soooo welcomed..a write about me is unnecessary...the tribute you did was extremely awesome.....that was enough....hearts like yours keep the recognition that God Lives...a surge felt in what your heart writes....a messenger...Terrie*
Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.5) -- Wednesday, April 20 2005, 04:33 pm

Great Job...

How strange a thing it is that one word, of four letters can contain an eternal, boundless, beautiful, emotional bond. Truly wonderful Love is, great, great, job Terrie, you have captured with words the wonderful melding of two hearts in love, a poem that surely softens even the hardest of hearts, simply beautiful.
Terrie* (65.148.208.220) -- Wednesday, April 20 2005, 06:53 pm

Thank you, your such a gentleman...

Ing, yes love is truely wonderful...shares all ....and i believe love has captured me...thank you for your warm comments.....it softened my heart...Terrie*
Taylor James (81.139.224.247) -- Wednesday, April 20 2005, 08:50 pm

Terrie*

why do you keeo writing such good poems that make my heart jus miss a beat!!!lol!! ur such a talented writeri love this poem kepp writing hun love **Taylor**
Terrie* (65.148.231.220) -- Thursday, April 21 2005, 03:20 am

Hi Taylor,

i blame it on love...and .....the man i love inspires me with his love and his love and gift for poetry..thank you for the sincerity and warm comments..they touch my soul..as they inspire me as well .....Terrie*
 
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