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Not What You Think
22 April, 2005
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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You think you are so FINE.
I'm just glad you're not MINE.

You are arrogant and RUDE.
To me I think you are so CRUDE.

You think you're IMPRESSING others.
When actually you are DEPRESSING others.

------- Author's Notes -------

I wrote this after meeting someone in the coffee shop.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.147.241.94) -- Friday, April 22 2005, 04:12 am

i know what cha' mean...

Hi Barb, ya know attitude has alot to do with..what one see's on the outside looking in..even beauty caint hide that.....bein' rude & crude cain certainly gag a first time encounter..i'm w/ya on this one doll...thanx for sharin'.....Terrie*
anonymous (207.200.116.136) -- Friday, April 22 2005, 07:05 am

buying coffee!

maybe this guy needed to have his coffe fix...mybe then he would of been nicer to talk to? Or just born jerk?....you have interesting poems, that make you think about ourself.....let us have it!...thanks Barb
Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Friday, April 22 2005, 09:20 am

true

Great words written with great rhythm.

I know the kind of person you mean. They think they are just great, when really they are just a pain.
barb (207.245.229.146) -- Friday, April 22 2005, 02:39 pm

thanks everyone

oh and annoymous he was drinking his coffee and was still a jerk. the thing is he talked about all his money and all the woman after him and thought that made him cool but really it made him look desparate. lol
 
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