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A Thousand Words Terrie*
23 April, 2005
Author: Britney

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I could say a thousand words to show how much
you mean. I could say many words to describe
your heart so pure indeed. How you care about
others is one two many blessings from the start.

From the moment our great Lord thought of
you from the very start. We knew you would be a wonder
ful thing he invisioned inside. We now know
many values you with hold I won't even deny.

For every rose I could hand you from the big
and small for everything you have done to please
us all you would get thousands of roses in many
ways shapes sized and more.

You are a memory no one could ever let go that we truely adore.
That amazing smile you have the probably blocks
out the darkness when ever your child is in fear.

The intelligence you with hold is more than I could
say in many ways. The wife figure you are is just so
pure and true.

The impact you have on me but you may not know.
The impact you have on others in many words untold.
The truth inside you heart the way it should remain.

Oh, Terrie the purity of your heart. Your joy from
the start. The peacefully beautiful white dove from
within. The Life you give. The honesty that flows.
The ignition that always make you start.

You are more than one could ask for in the wonderful
heart. As told in a thousand words yet most are still unsaid...

------- Author's Notes -------

Terrie* this is dedicated to you as I said I was going to make a poem in your recoginiton and you see I have! I hope you enjoyed your read Terrie* have a nice day!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.202.174) -- Saturday, April 23 2005, 06:55 pm

((Britney))), my sweet child...

Oh my Lord...(lump in my throat..breathing in deep...exhailing out for a long time...tears rolling down my cheek) Britney,you are sooooo amazing....ya wanna know how many tissues iwent through as i was readin' this????PLENTY...LOL ...sweetie this was such a sweet jesture....awww to dedicate such a sweet thought to me..i am so honored...and speechless at the same time...
as you know you and many others have grown on me..i feel like "Aunt-T" to many on this glorious site...sweetie your heart is sooo full of love and life.....may you enjoy it to the fullest..again oh WOW! i feel myself getting all tongue tied./numb..and weak at the knees..the words escape my very lips but caint bring them out to form a decent coherent word...when i get too excited ..my daughter teases me and says English mum...English LOL...i tell you ..you are awesome..you are sooooo gifted girl....your talents go deep and you are one among many inspiring young ladies that have a heart for all...so proud of ya...You are amazing !!!!thank you...
(wipin' tear away )....much love..
Terrie*-AKA-Aun-T*
Britney (67.136.93.53) -- Sunday, April 24 2005, 01:53 am

:)

Terrie aw sweet Terrie. I'm so glad you think I am an amazing young woman for such my young age (14)..! Awww you went threw tissues I made you cry lol. Thats so touching I did that to someone in a good way though. You shouldn't feel honered because to me your always up there. I am so glad you enjoyed this. I tried to make it as good as I could possibly make it. Wow I made you weak where you could barley talk very wow. Lol talk english...I may be gifted but the Lord made me gifted thank him. Your welcome. Love ~Britney~
Mere (216.24.105.130) -- Sunday, April 24 2005, 02:50 am

Nice!

Very, very sweet poem, Britney. Keep me posted on them! I'd really, really like that. I'd also like it if we could talk about our poetry. I really think you have potential, one day you'll be a famous writer. Anyway, talk to ya later! ~Mere~
Britney (67.136.93.53) -- Sunday, April 24 2005, 04:32 pm

Mere...

Thanks alot. *smiles* I'll try to keep you posted on them... but I have to figure that out. A famous writer hmm... I don't know I don't find my self that good. Talk to you too soon. ~Britney~
 
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