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I Feel...
Author: Britney

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I feel like I tried for you so hard
yet you let me down.
I feel as if you were the one I was suppose
to trust yet your the one that left me with the
frown.
I feel as if you tore me apart and left me to scar.
I feel as if you let me down so much it left
a single tear down on the ground.
I feel so much anger inside it's hard to hold
it in.
I feel as if nothing but clouds are around my life
cause of this hell that strives.
I feel you and only you... made me feel so untrue.
I'm not hesitating for this to be known.
On my own I guess I have to live up to the pain
you cause in the so called heart you love.
I feel your the cause of all my pain....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.150.167.159) -- Wednesday, April 27 2005, 06:11 pm

i felt it,

Hi Britney Miss "Goddess of Inspiration"
beautiful work .i loved how you sunk your feelin's into it. great work keep that pen flowin'
Angel in Tears (81.129.152.2) -- Wednesday, April 27 2005, 08:28 pm

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Great poem!
Britney (67.136.114.12) -- Friday, April 29 2005, 12:58 am

....

thanks for the comments
Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Friday, April 29 2005, 05:15 pm

Darnit

Don't worry Britney, what goes around comes around. I think they call it karma. I'm not sure. I need to look that one up. --Bountiful poem!
Britney (67.136.114.12) -- Friday, April 29 2005, 09:21 pm

Thanx....

It's alright... I got way emtional to when it happend but I will not say what did go down.... yeah they need the karma.... thanks alot.
Britney (67.136.114.12) -- Saturday, April 30 2005, 03:49 am

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then again...karma may not be the answer
 
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