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Perfect Circle??
Author: Taylor James

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A perfect circle
is a matter of life
goes round and round
from life to death.

you go through times
god and bad,
looking for the times,
you've already had.

you cant go back
in this circle of life,
you must face facts,
your mistakes make impact.

dont let it fool you,
you can always make up
its never too late
its not a matter of luck.

you will soon see,
that you have another chance,
so make the right choices
so you can hear their voices.

In this un-perfect circle of life.

------- Author's Notes -------

this poem is about me and my grandparents, i made a mistake,but now ive got the chance to make up and i plan on making it up to them as much as i can. hope you like it love

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.150.167.159) -- Wednesday, April 27 2005, 06:06 pm

Hi Taylor

these are indeed beautiful words.I love it!happy to hear your makin' it all up. Sometimes we don't get such a lucky break in life for a second chance.i wish you much Blessings upon your effort.admire ya for that.
Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Thursday, April 28 2005, 10:44 am

awww terrie*

hey, thanx for your comment,i really appriciate it, i really like readin ur comments as you always write such nice things, neways thank you terrie*
Britney (67.136.114.12) -- Friday, April 29 2005, 02:28 pm

Taylor...

This poem was so good I loved it.....at least they are giving youy a second chance thats good of them to do.... that was an amazing poem good job
Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Friday, April 29 2005, 05:16 pm

niiiiiice

I hope they read this Lovely dedication! They forgave you right? Hope so. Take care!
Taylor James (81.133.114.49) -- Friday, April 29 2005, 08:12 pm

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hey britney an meri, you people are sooooo nice,thank you for your comments,i reallyu love reading them,well i sent the poem to them but ive heard nop reply,ive tried my hardest to make up,but it doesnt seem to be workin,hopefully they will find it in thier hearts to forgive me,im so happy that you liked ma poem
 
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