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Forever Can Be Forever
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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Our time together should have last,
You took me so high in many ways,
Then with a pull of a rug,
You took it all away,
Iíd watch you sleep,
I was always there for us,
Told you Iíd love you forever,
Forever was ment forever,
To recover I cannot see,
You left a passion inside of me,
You left a scar in my mind,
You left my heart in pieces,
These things time can never heal,
So if you donít mind Iíll carry on loving you,
If you ever hear the word forever,
Youíll think of me and know it does exist.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.209.80) -- Tuesday, March 16 2004, 06:15 pm

I've seen your poem on poetry.com too!

Well Clive, you've outdid yourself!! This extraordinary poem is very meaningful!
Clive (63.184.0.32, 20) -- Wednesday, March 17 2004, 05:45 am

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I put some on there but do not use that site much
Brett (205.214.208.141) -- Saturday, April 3 2004, 02:46 am

Three thumbs up!

This poem in my opinion is so deep and meaningful. I love the way you were able to express yourself and create such passion when doing so. Great piece of work! Well done!
 
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