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Hopeless
1 May, 2005
Author: Senko

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Here and there I go,
oh what woe!
Never feeling like I belong,
just like a wrong verse in a song.

Between two places I go,
one like paradise,
one like down under,
and each one never perfect.

So I lose myself in dreams,
never thinking of the world between
Till something goes wrong,
and then again I;m the wrong verse in a song.

Will this cycle never end?
Why cant this all just be pretend?
Hundreds of thousands of tears I've cried,
so much now it hurts my eyes.

And even though people say "Dont cry"
all those fake, phony voices.
But i will cry, and you know why?
Because I'm so lonely, and so sad,
and just.....hopeless.

------- Author's Notes -------

I wrote this when I felt I had lost all hope of happiness....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Angel in Tears (81.157.217.222) -- Sunday, May 1 2005, 11:14 pm

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Hope you found your hope.Great poem!
Anjali Thapa (202.161.146.44) -- Friday, November 25 2005, 04:26 pm

Cheer up !

Great Poem, but have you ever tried to look beyond loneliness, depression and all ? There's a whole new world waiting for you and you have a right to it. Everybody's different. You are what you are,love yourself for that.You sure can make a difference.Waiting for your coming works with a happy and hopeful note ...
 
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