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I, See You
4 May, 2005
Author: ShyHeart

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I see you in the morning, I see you when the sun, goes down
I see you as I wait, for the traffic light, to turn green
I see you in my rear view mirror, as I fly, down the highway
I see you when the highway patrol, says, good morning to me

I see you as I write my name upon this speeding heart
I see you, when I feel lost, hell, sweet lady, I see you all the time
Like when I go to lunch, the waitress asks? what will you have
I get crazy, wish the two of us could, share a plate of love

I see you when no one else is around, I see you in the midst, of a crowd
I see you when I try to think, I see you when, I blink my eyes
I see you everywhere, I see you in my arms, I see you, all the time
I see you most of all, when my heart, takes a breath, for the both of us

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (216.191.60.29) -- Thursday, May 5 2005, 04:35 am

nice

Your writing is so emotional to me. One thing Martin if you see her everywhere at least you're never lonely :))
Martin Vann (63.25.134.236) -- Thursday, May 5 2005, 01:51 pm

Thanks, Barb

I really, appreciate your thoughts and I also, enjoy this type of poem.
Britney (67.136.106.154) -- Thursday, May 5 2005, 03:07 pm

Martin

I liked this poem.. diffrent than something that I would normally read.. It was a nice read.. Keep writing..
Martin Vann (63.25.181.9) -- Thursday, May 5 2005, 06:19 pm

Yes, This Is A Different Read, But, True

Thank You Britney, Seems to me, like you to reach out, to where you have never been, then again, that is what poet's do. Thank You Britney.
 
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