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I Was Walking
9 May, 2005
Author: Ing Twi Demalah

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I was walking this morning,
And someone called your name.
Who it was I turned to see,
Yet there was no one there,
No one, only me.

And while I was walking,
I watched the sun begin to rise
And light upon the dew,
My head was filled with images,
And thoughts of only you.

I was walking at midday.
And someone said “I love you.”
I quickly turned to see,
Again no one was there,
No one, only me.

And as I walked along my path,
The wind began to blow.
Autumn leaves fell to the ground,
And someone said “I miss you,”
Yet I was the only one around.

I was walking this evening,
As the sun began to fade.
And again someone called your name,
A voice I could not place,
Yet Familiar just the same.

As I walked evening turned to night,
All the lights began to dim.
Someone kept you in their heart,
Hoping you would always be close,
Never too far apart.

I was walking today,
And someone called your name.
Who it was I need not see,
I know the someone that I heard,
And that someone, was me.

------- Author's Notes -------

Often, it is hardest to admit to ourselves that we are in love.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.213.122) -- Monday, May 9 2005, 01:36 am

Ing ,you are a Master at love..

oh WOW! i could visualize and see everything as i place myself within ....this was soooo touchin'...i know what ya mean, sometimes i wonder why love found me again .thanx for sharin' your heart.
Angel in Tears (81.129.188.11) -- Monday, May 9 2005, 06:35 pm

Ing Twi Demalah,

This is so wonderful! I could visualize your words in motion! Brilliant! Keep up the excellent work!
Meridian (205.188.117.10) -- Monday, May 9 2005, 07:40 pm

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Is there more to this Ing? Your style of writing is like a motion picture movie! Terrie and Angel said everything! You are awesome, man! Great stuff! From sunrise to sunset, to evening to night; you heard the same voice and tried to figure out who! Now, that's what I call intellectual ability!
Terrific Ing Twi D!
 
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