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If
9 May, 2005
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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If I saw you on a moonlight beach,
Would you turn and look at me?

If I saw you in a grocers store,
Would you look and see it was me?

If I were to send you that letter,
Would you read each word with love?

If I were to hold you tight,
Would you hold the love I give?

If I were to kiss your lips,
Would you press yours against mine too?

If I told you I dream only you,
Would you dream of me with you too?

If I gave you my heart,
Would you care and keep it safe?

If I knocked upon your door,
Would you welcome and show me in?

If I would give up my life,
Would you do the same for me?

If I were to share and give only to you,
Would you be prepared to do the same?

If I now tell you,
It’s you my heart cries for each night,
It’s my tears that stain the pillow,
All because of you in me.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.142.64.179) -- Monday, May 9 2005, 06:55 pm

deep if's & would's. that deserve a "YES"

Clive , my friend. who could possibly resist and say otherwise? this was truely beautiful and meaningful.thanx for exposing the tenderness of your heart for us feel and allowin' us to taste the tears that flowed.i love this poem!
Meridian (205.188.117.10) -- Monday, May 9 2005, 07:23 pm

Clive, it's 2005

Hiya Clive! Sorry there, I love rhyming with your name! Nice questions! If we don't ask, we'll never get to know the answer! Well, you already have one yes from Lady T, so I say yes too! LOL!
Keep it flowin'! Wondrous creation!
barb (66.46.241.63) -- Tuesday, May 10 2005, 03:31 pm

nice and romantic

This is the kind of things woman like to hear , kind, loving, romantic love. way to go Clive. thanks
 
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