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Hello Stranger
Author: Mike

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Hello stranger, who are you?
Why do you stare at me the way you do?
What is it you want from me?
You've taken my soul, what else could there be?

My heart has almost stopped beating,
the rythm never to be repeated.
My ears have almost stopped hearing,
While the pain inside is eternally searing.

My mouth has all but quietened down,
My face contorted in a hateful frown.
My eyes are blind, they see nothign at all.
I can no longer rise from the places I fall.

So hello, stranger, what do you want?
Everything I had is everything you got.
Hello stranger, why don't you pass?
Why do you stare at me from the looking glass?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Holly (82.34.160.81) -- Wednesday, May 11 2005, 05:16 pm

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Oh wow, the last line is so effective. After I read it, I read the whole poem again, just to take it in. Awesome.
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Thursday, May 12 2005, 02:51 pm

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Nice poem, it'd be better if I actually got it though.. for example, lmao, what's a looking glass? :|
Mike (82.35.78.155) -- Thursday, May 12 2005, 06:46 pm

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A 'looking glass' is a mirror, Raimee..
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Friday, May 13 2005, 10:07 pm

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..Oh. - Awesome poem dude.
angel on the edge (202.89.42.35) -- Sunday, May 15 2005, 06:54 am

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hey love all your poems - cnt get over how good you are at writing!!! awesome awesome luv dem
kept writing so i can read.
Yanny (82.19.2.197) -- Monday, May 16 2005, 07:07 pm

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x] i was the same as Raim, I was thinking what is a looking glass? Is it a mirror? But your comment confirmed my doubts ^^
 
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