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Believe Me Or Not
Author: Taylor James

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now you dont believe me,
what am i to do?
out of all the people
i thought i really knew,
you were a surprise
as you think i told a lie!

i dont know what to say,
im bundled with all these words,
words that i cannot see
why dont you believe in me?

it hurts too much to explain
all the things inside.
so from now on i guess they'll have to hide.

i cant believe, its you
of all people in this school
your the one
who doesnt believe
believe in what i say.

it makes no difference now
you said what you thought.
but where do we go from here
this is what i fear.

------- Author's Notes -------

it really hurts when the one person who you think will believe you doesnt especially whens its a best mate. but we sorting things out, and hopefully we can forget bout this but if not then i dont know whats gonna happen. but hopefully we'll get through.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

anonymous (195.195.115.4) -- Wednesday, May 11 2005, 01:21 pm

Good poem....

I was honest and I hope you can see that. Would it have been better if I didn't say that I thought you told a lie? But you know that I believe in honesty, and I rather have you know how I feel, then pretending and lying to your face. We will get through this. Maybe we already have..
Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Wednesday, May 11 2005, 02:05 pm

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hi anonymous, i can see you were honest and i do respect it.but it hurts so much when sum1 you love thinks you rlying to there face.maybe you dont understand how thta feels i dont know, but if you do then you must know what im going through!! i think were half way there to being our old selves again!! fanx for coment
Meridian (172.140.166.215) -- Wednesday, May 11 2005, 05:33 pm

A Matter of Trust

I read that book once and it's like what you're going through. Someone you are close to, you would think they would believe that you could do anything. It hurts when they believe the opposite. Great self expression
Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Thursday, May 12 2005, 01:18 pm

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hey meri, thnx for the comment, your exactly right it hurts so much when somone you love fails to believe what you are saying is true!! its just a big sting.glad you liked the poem,
 
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