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I'm The Burden In Your Life
11 May, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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if I could
I'd give you every star above
if I could
I'd write my love for you
deep into the sky
and I'd spread all that love
in every corner of the Globe
every where you looked
you'd read about my love for you

touch your heart
do you feel my heart beat?
touch your lips
do you feel mine locked
upon yours ao tight?
close your eyes
can you see me makin' love to you
within your soul?
breath in
can you feel and digest me
as you breath me in?
look upward and touch the sky
do you feel Gods love
wrap around us
cain you feel me?
as we become one heart?

Guerro I'm the burden
you took in to your life
and made me your wife
because you trust your heart
as well as mine

you need not prove your love for me
i feel you deep!

------- Author's Notes -------

such a burden am i...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Wednesday, May 11 2005, 02:00 pm

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terrie*, this is a wounderful poem, he probably know all the love you have for him,dont ever say you are a burden because that is not true, by your writing i can see you a a fantstic lady.
love the poem
Terrie* (65.148.211.131) -- Saturday, May 14 2005, 01:02 am

Thank you Taylor,

this was such a sweet comment,you have a special heart. yea,i can become a handful sometimes LOL.
 
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