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My Angels
Author: Angel On The Edge

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today my heart was weak
The pain was unbearable
It was hard to speak

All hope had left me
All happiness had gone
My head was fulled of thoughts
But they were all muddled up and wrong

Amotions building up inside
I didnt want to cry
I was trying to say strong
I really did try

But the pressure was to hard to take
I grew weak
I started to break

The final strew
And i brust into tears
To see my best friend walk away
Bought up so many fears

But an amazing thing happened
Angels did come
Sourounding me with love
I rested in their arms
They drained my pain away
Catching my tears
My angels sent from above
Protecting me from all my fears.

------- Author's Notes -------

my bestie wasnt there but i still have lots of good mates - thank god

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Meridian (172.140.166.215) -- Wednesday, May 11 2005, 05:25 pm

Thought I

Hey Aimee! Thought I had to grab some toilet paper to wipe my eyes, the beginning was so sad. But then the story took on a twist and the ending turned out to be happy. Even though one of your friends turned on you, it's good to hear that you're in good spirits! Lovely! Now, that's what I like; when someone is feeling cheery!
Supuuuuurb poem Aimee!
 
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