Author: Taylor James
"You stupid little boy"
is what i am told
"what did you do today?
did you cry and unfold?"
The answer is yes,
i cried all day.
trying to get my head round,
the true reality i have found.
I cried myself to sleep
without making a peep.
This morning when i woke
my heart nearly broke!
All the tears i have cried,
leaves no fluid left inside
my tears keep flowing
while my self-esteem is going.
trying to hide the tears inside
but for some reason they just wonít seem to hide.
nothing left to cry
thereís no more fluid left inside
my eyes i have to hide
to stop them from their pride.
------- Author's Notes -------
what can i do?? i haven't a clue...
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Terrie* (22.214.171.124) -- Saturday, May 14 2005, 04:13 am|
an excellent but, sad read .thanx for allowin' us to read..cry to him even if your tears from your eyes seem to have gone dry , the tears from your heart share the pain.God sees, God listens, God understands! just give him a chance he will move mountains for you!
|Angel in Tears (126.96.36.199) -- Saturday, May 14 2005, 09:01 pm|
Hey Taylor! Itís unnecessary to hide how you feel. It won't help if you hide yourself. If you must cry, then let the tears flow. There is no point of suppressing them inside. Great poem!
|Alicia (188.8.131.52) -- Sunday, May 15 2005, 01:43 am|
Can i please use ur poem 4 my school project it is that u have to think up of a poem and then on monday it is dew and i LOVE this poem PLEASE
|Taylor James (184.108.40.206) -- Sunday, May 15 2005, 12:14 pm|
hi alicia glad that you like my poem and yes you may use it if you wish. hope your project goes well
|Taylor James (220.127.116.11) -- Sunday, May 15 2005, 04:29 pm|
hey Terrie* and Angel in Tears,well my belief in god is very minimal,i find it rerally hard to talk to sum 1 to whom i cannot see, but i trust you terrie* and i will take your advice,thank you Angel but you know as well as i do that im the king at suppressing my feelings. thank you both for your comments
|Mike (18.104.22.168) -- Tuesday, May 17 2005, 05:31 pm|
You're not really that good at supressing them. Just because we don't say anything, doesn't mean we don't take notice.
|barb (22.214.171.124) -- Tuesday, May 17 2005, 10:14 pm|
Taylor I hate it when I here pain and Hurt. Your writing is so expressive, Love it. I was one of the kids that felt pain and all I can tell you is do what helps to get you through, If crying helps then cry . but like you said no more fluid is left,so doing this is good . writing your anger, your pain on paper helps never give up . Get mads at your abusers and sghow them that they can't take your spirit away.
|Taylor James (126.96.36.199) -- Wednesday, May 18 2005, 02:37 pm|
hi mike and barb, i no im not that good at suppressing my feelings but when i really try i nearly succeed, and somtimes when theres somthing wrong no body notices coz i try to act like my normal self somtimes it works and others it doesnt. somtimes when i get mad they just knock me back down, so i try not to bother . thank you both for the comment really appreciated
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