Author: Andy


Shattered dreams,
Broken heart,
Pain and anger,
Tear me apart.

Eyes are red,
Heart is black,
You took my love,
I want it back!

Anger boils,
Bitter rage,
Thoughts of you,
Flame the blaze.

Red hot fire,
In my minds eye,
I try and wait,
For it to die.

Days creep by,
In shades of grey,
Lost the path,
Can't find my way.

Night comes quick,
So dark and long,
Toss and turn,
Wait for dawn.

Days turn to weeks,
Weeks to months,
When will this anger,
Decide that's enough?


Comments on this poem/writing:

steph ( -- Thursday, April 28 2005, 06:08 pm

no title

Jasmine Castle ( -- Friday, April 29 2005, 08:19 pm


this poem is beautiful
Terrie* ( -- Saturday, April 30 2005, 10:14 pm

Hi Andy

have been there know what it's like, cain also happen when you love one person too deep!
stephanie buchanan ( -- Thursday, October 27 2005, 08:48 pm


great job u and me have things in common in this poem
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