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Why?
14 May, 2005
Author: Gemma_13

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Why did i have to fall for a boy who doesn't care?
I loved everything about him, I just wanted us to be a pair.
I cried day and night longing for him to call,
and the pain i felt when i hit the bottom of the fall.
Then when i saw him with another girl i broke down in tears,
romours went round and how i feel is different to what he hears.
I love james with all my heart
Iwanted us to be together
not like this,
not so far apart !
But who knows how he feels,
I just hope this broken heart of mine heals.
MY ONE AND ONLY WISH IS TO BE WITH JAMES,
NO MORE PLAYING AND PLEASE NO MORE GAMES!

------- Author's Notes -------

This is a poem i wrote when i found out that the guy of my dreams was going out with another girl it really broke my heart. BUT A GIRL HAS TO BE STRONG!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.142.64.199) -- Saturday, May 14 2005, 07:26 pm

Gemma _13

may i ask,is James aware of how you feel? love is something you share w/someone . sometimes two hearts are too shy to come forward and say what they feel, i went out on a semi-date with one guy whom told me how a certain sailor still felt about me. guess what? i married the sailor boy .Good Luck !!!thanx 4 sharin'.
Gem_13 (81.97.143.190) -- Monday, May 16 2005, 09:44 pm

terrie

hi yeh james knows how i feel but i have recentley found out that were not meant to be together. Were 2 totally different people n i dont think we'll eva work no matter how much i want it.Thnx 4 the advice
gemma_13 (81.96.98.201) -- Saturday, July 23 2005, 11:36 pm

Terrie

hey terrie thanks again for your comments on most of my poems i enjoy reading them. for helping me keep a positive mind !!!!
 
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