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Dear God
19 May, 2005
Author: mArLeNe

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I know its only been 14 years but I think I'm ready to go
The pain, distortion, and misery I doubt you'll ever know
Please make me part of heaven, please give me a new life
Please take me right away and alleviate the strife
The people who claim they love me seem to be the reason for my pain
To them my words are nothing, even my actions are in vain
Even the love of my life seems to be slipping away
We seem to be drifting apart more and more each day
He tells me that he loves me and for some reason I dont believe its true
So please, God, please just take me home with you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Kami (4.240.36.15) -- Thursday, January 5 2006, 03:57 am

intense

intense. I knew exactly how you fell. i was going throught the same thing.
TIFFANY (68.200.50.1) -- Tuesday, February 5 2008, 01:48 am

SO SAD

ITS SO SAD BUT I LOVE IT.
 
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