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Someone Kill Cupid
Author: Andy

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Someone kill Cupid,
Please stop him dead,
He messes with hearts,
He messes with heads.

Valentines Day is coming,
He'll be in the mad throes,
Of a love inspired rampage,
Setting the sights of his bow.

He does it for kicks,
He does it for fun,
When you see Cupid coming,
Get up and run!

A kid with an arrow,
Choosing your life mate,
It sounds like a joke,
Yet we call it fate.

Someone kill Cupid,
Please stop him dead,
I'd love to see him,
All splattered with red.

He's the cause of heartbreak,
Pain, and despair,
He's the reason for so many
Bucket loads of tears.

Love should be banished,
And Cupid destroyed,
Then sense and harmony,
Could again be restored.

Imagine a life without
Pain, hurt, and hate.
To live without love,
Would really be great.

They go hand in hand,
You know sooner or later,
The love that you feel,
Will be cruelly slaughtered.

So let's cut to the chase,
Bring it to a head,
Someone kill Cupid,
Please stop him dead.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

faye (195.92.67.66) -- Sunday, December 15 2002, 07:29 pm

hmmm...

hmmm...a very intrestin poem... i luv it. it totaly discribes love in a way it really is.
Ginger Fish (165.76.25.19) -- Sunday, February 9 2003, 03:34 pm

Sucked me in.

I'm not a fan of poems of "love". But this was a totally new way of looking at this subject, and I was totally into it. Amazed at how much 'smart' the poem was. My only adverse opinion is the ending. I didn't like it because it sounded like it was saying "well this is the end of my poem". But its your thing. Thanks for writing it.
BLOSSUM (152.163.188.161) -- Saturday, February 22 2003, 04:38 pm

TRUE

I DONT LIKE TO HAVE BOYFRIENDS BECAUSE OF THE HEART BRAKE AND THIS POEM TELLS THE TRUTH. THANKS FOR WRITING THIS
Tonya (67.65.21.150) -- Monday, May 5 2003, 07:34 pm

Well written poem

hey andy i totally agree with you and that poem. love is great but it always ends with some kind of disapointment and if you dont fall for someone you dont get hurt. its great i liked it.
Mazz (210.9.199.43) -- Wednesday, June 25 2003, 06:52 am

AMEN !

Very assy work !
jessika (24.108.39.34) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 08:02 pm

love it

i love it its sooo true
TwistedShot (68.158.229.7) -- Friday, September 26 2003, 08:25 pm

Hells yea!

Dude this poem is awsome man, nice job.
*Ashley (66.53.138.170) -- Monday, October 6 2003, 12:27 am

So tru

This poems really good. Its weird, but good.
liz (64.6.97.83) -- Tuesday, October 7 2003, 09:27 pm

what the hell

love is amazing why r u bashing it?
vela_08 (142.165.28.15) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 12:48 am

i dunno...

its kind like the whole love hate tragety, love id great but pain sucks! hmmmm it really provics thought! i love/hate it just like the tragety! but the wring i awsome! shagg-o-delic!lolz
Angel in Tears (81.157.150.250) -- Saturday, February 19 2005, 08:25 pm

..

How come when one is in love they say why in the world would you want to live with ought it?And when your heartbroken you say what is the point?Get rid of it!
Love (lol) your poem!Irony...:o)
aimee aka bubz (202.89.42.31) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 08:08 am

andy-go liz

really good poem-and yea love hurts when you loss it but without love you are nothing!!!love is a gift givin to us and its intersting to see everyones comments on it(go liz)life would sux worse then it does now without love!!! writeback aimee
 
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