Come Rescue Me
20 May, 2005
Author: Terrie*
relax your heart
leave it with me
relax your soul
leave it behind
relax your mind
slip out of it long enough
to be my hero
i'm lost & lonely find me
release the pressure ,the tension
go deep
and hold me tight!
rescue me
when you find me
stay inside
together our muscles will be relaxed
beyond measure
as we release some steam
of our love
that we enjoyed buildin' up
together we feel one another explode
passionatly within
our hearts
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Clive (70.57.141.86) -- Saturday, May 21 2005, 12:20 am Terrie you can turn any cold night or day into a warm relaxing experiance |
| Whisper (66.46.241.95) -- Wednesday, May 25 2005, 02:12 am This would be so good if not so subjestive. your writing is good but the words together are imature. |
| Terrie* (66.81.133.133) -- Wednesday, May 25 2005, 04:48 am thanx , for your warm thought. |
| Terrie* (66.81.133.133) -- Wednesday, May 25 2005, 04:51 am thanx for the constructive crticism, i understand, and i apologize with a humble heart. for those that know me, sorry if my words seem a bit immature, i'm bein' mature about it LOL |
| barb (66.46.230.59) -- Wednesday, May 25 2005, 02:58 pm Terrie love is different than sex My past I guess made me a prude over things like this . I love your love writing but the sex writing isn't my liking good writing tho. |
| Terrie* (66.81.137.171) -- Wednesday, May 25 2005, 04:21 pm no offense taken,i love honest folks, every 1's opinion counts, no need 4 an apology Luv,we all have our likes & dislikes, i cain understand where your comin' from i mean no disrespect...i write what makes ME happy , I apologize if my writin' offends you. i hope everyone else isn't offended in what and how my hearts feelings pour out in my writin' : ( |
| barb (66.46.230.59) -- Thursday, May 26 2005, 02:52 am I love your writing Terrie . I guess I just get carried away with my likes and dislikes. Others will like it. |
| Terrie* (66.81.134.146) -- Friday, May 27 2005, 12:24 am thank you ,my writes are about my love i share for ONE man . he may read it , he knows i don't expect him to comment, but when he does comment on some of my work i apreciate it..thank you once again sweetie .barb, knowin' that you love my writin' makes me feel special ..thank you! |
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