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Painkiller
23 May, 2005
Author: Holly

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Words can't describe you,
So I don't know why I try.
Did you know you're the only person left,
Who can still make me cry?

It's a relief to have something so good,
That's not just in my mind.
You're the only thing that's real,
To me you're one of a kind.

You're the one who blunts the blade,
Saves me when I start to sink.
And although I never believe your kind words,
I can pretend I'm as good as you think.

We all have our addictions,
And it's pretty clear you're mine.
I feel no hurt when I think of you,
You're my painkiller time after time.

------- Author's Notes -------

Haha, my feeble attempt at writing about love. I wrote this about an ex actually.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Jashmine (211.27.204.3) -- Wednesday, May 25 2005, 10:33 am

Pretty

Oooh, this ones pretty.. All I have to say
Holly (217.134.228.156) -- Thursday, May 26 2005, 04:37 pm

...

Thanks Jas
Mike (82.35.78.155) -- Friday, May 27 2005, 06:43 pm

Yes, pretty..

Woop, first comment title.
It's funny, I actually wrote a love poem on the day this was submitted. Haven't had time to put it up yet.. Great minds think alike, eh Holly? Yes, great poem. Feeble? Never.
Gem_13 (81.97.143.190) -- Friday, May 27 2005, 08:53 pm

aaahhhh

aaaaahhhhhhhhh how sweet this poem is realy really cute ;) great words
 
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