A rush of delicate breeze- So intricate, so enticing as it came through the open window. It was definitely a day to be out, which is where Amelia wanted to be. It had been merely three months before that Amelia’s house had come crashing down, her father engulfed in those delicious flames. She couldn’t help it; it was her nature. She sat in the attorney’s office, as content as could be. They would be in soon. God knows how long it would last.
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This is the beginning of just a teaser I was coming up with in my spare time during one of my classes in school. I needed somewhere to store it so I could continue later, but I'd appreciate any criticism to improve it before I submit the finished piece.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meri (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, May 24 2005, 04:29 pm|
What's cooking? Hey Scorpio! As always, divine story! So her files were that negative eh? If Mr. Thorne had something positive to work with, he'd probably change his tune...hehhe... Wonderful, applause applause!
|hello (184.108.40.206) -- Tuesday, May 24 2005, 05:08 pm|
very nice, hun. i loved the teaser. very nice.
|Scorpio (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, May 25 2005, 01:39 am|
I haven't been writing in a while (A lot of exams), so I thought I'd be a little rusty, heh. Anyway, I sparked the inspiration during one of my classes and typed it up and didn't want to lose it or anything. But I enjoyed writing it and thanks for the positive feedback, guys.
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