I Remember The Night / I Remember The Sunrise
i remember the night
i was full of delight
a wonderful sight
i knew this time
it would ignite.
i was nevous and uptight
we held so closely
and our eyes said goodnight.
i remember the sunrise
frosty tears outside
was no surpise
no caring in her eyes
i was suddenly in paralyze.
i lost her foever
it's no disguise.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (188.8.131.52) -- Wednesday, May 19 2004, 04:07 pm|
Beautiful flow and excellent rhyme scheme! I love the way you put emphasis on your pain... I'm sad that you lost her forever though.... But very good title to sum up the events that happened that night and early that morning....
Very heartfelt and heart touching!
|sonya (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 03:50 am|
i love it so much can you write one for me
|taboo (220.127.116.11) -- Thursday, February 13 2014, 11:32 pm|
very flowing and true i'm sure. excellent
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