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To Batafish
Author: Ben Franklin

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questioning why your here,
your very low esteem draws me a tear.

such a talent in what you do,
your writing speaks volumes
and it shines right through.

I may have felt the way you do now,
questioning the world...
"why"
"when"
and "how".

you see we are put here for a reason that can
take a long time to find,
but me caring about about you,well..
do you not see that as a sign?

keep your head up mate.

------- Author's Notes -------

for batafish

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah (204.112.163.220) -- Tuesday, December 28 2004, 08:33 am

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nice words....
Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Tuesday, December 28 2004, 10:12 am

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he just seems really down as alot of other people do,but we can all use a lift sometime. thanks for reading. Ben
Terrie* (65.148.233.122) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 01:35 am

Ben, such great meaningful words...

you share w/our friend here..many of us question the same...some of us find the answers almost immediatly sometimes we don't...it took me 13 years to find out mine..when i lost love to death..until he found host in another and has returned and revived my heart..thank you for such deep words..Batafish will ..be touched as i...HUGS/LOVE..and a better 2005....
Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 02:22 pm

Terrie*

thank you for reading T,hope you also have a lovely 2005, lots of Love Your friend Ben.
joyce ivy (68.19.169.142) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 03:26 pm

Nice Ben F...

very nice poem Ben.from a kind heart.Batafish will be lifted.just as you lift all of us here with your words.thanks for sharing your lovely work. your friend.Joyce
Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 03:34 pm

joyce..

hi J, thank you for your kind words,hope its proved to batafish that theres people that care. take care your friend Ben x
 
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