The True Side Of Someone
If you want to see the true side of someone
piss them off and it'll be done.
Place demands that can't be met,
in the end you'll be the one too fret.
Cause people are like amimals you see,
backed in a corner you don't wanna find me.
Cause when push comes to shove,
I'll send you sailing way up above.
I'm just not the type to be told what to do,
when to do it,where to do it or how-to.
So if the true side is what you want to see,
then keep placing all your demands on me.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Terrie* (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, June 23 2005, 10:05 pm|
life cain be harsh on someones emotions and attitude, one must take control and not allow the negatives to rule tender hearts, love shared
brings more inner peace to a soul, no matter how cruel life is , our true side should always be as the inner and shown side,when we allow negative thoughts to breed within our mind , we are the ones to suffer internally, love susides all... strong emotions to whom ever pounced on your heart .. wouldn't want to cross ya, my naive,shyness may hide...LOL
|poisonivy (22.214.171.124) -- Friday, June 24 2005, 04:25 am|
thank you Terri and your right...we must take control...of the negative...and writing about it is how I take control of it....don't worry Terri I just my anger out in words...and then I feel better...thanks girl
|Terrie* (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, June 24 2005, 04:43 am|
sweetie,thats good i'm glad ya write it out , let yourself cool, wouldn't want bitternesss to ruin your life, that is what causes our soul to become ill, and it eats away, and sooner or later your not feelin' well, best therapy is to write about it,share it..do not become consumed by it. don't let your actions become bitter ones, i've seen the best fall cause of this, it causes self destruction..alcohol, drugs and the worst ,give it all to God, let him into your heart. take care
|poisonivy (188.8.131.52) -- Friday, June 24 2005, 06:49 pm|
yes Terri I know...I'm not bitter..just get frustrated at times...so I just write...and write...Most of my writes now are about love...I'll get them posted too...thanks for taking the time to read and comment...
|Terrie* (184.108.40.206) -- Sunday, June 26 2005, 10:53 pm|
Glad to hear, isn't it sweet when love is a part of our life?? and we cain share that love that we feel from our hearts in words,i went from missin' my first love to death, to lovin' someone whom has givin' me his name. i too am happy for you i want to see more uppity lovey poetry from ya girlfiend snap to it LOL
|barb (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, June 28 2005, 07:16 pm|
Good writing , honest writing . I thionk we all react to being pushed in different ways . Me I runaway leaving the whole situation, a coward yep lol.
|poisonivy60 (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, July 7 2005, 07:40 am|
thank you both...and Terrie I am very proud for you...and yes Barb I try to write with honesty...thanks again
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