Will You Be Mine?
Author: SweetVenom


Like a falcon scooping a prey,
I roam around looking for you,
Seeing you makes me gray,
I spend most of my day,
Thinking- ‘Will you be mine?’

Cowardice is what describes me the best,
Lacking the guts to tell you,
‘I will give you all my very best’,
All I want to ask you is,
‘Will you be mine?’

Your sharp eyes have captivated me,
That small nose has made me mad,
Those sweet lips has made me go crazy,
Enough of taunting me honey,
Will you be mine?

Difficult to see the ‘princess’ descend,
I don’t see you for many more days,
I long for some of those precious moments,
To meet you, one on one, to ask you,
Will you be mine?


Comments on this poem/writing:

Dinesh Ram Rajan ( -- Friday, September 30 2005, 10:40 am

Good One

Simply superb
Dhanapriya ( -- Monday, October 3 2005, 01:12 pm


If it is True, definitely it will be your's
Abi ( -- Friday, October 14 2005, 07:07 pm


very nice
Aarthi ( -- Wednesday, January 11 2006, 01:57 pm


Good one.
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