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Alive And Still Going
Author: SweetVenom

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Rising from the hiatus after many years,
I still wonder where I’ m going to end,
These thoughts flick through my ‘iota’ brain,
That things a lot and works without a pain.

I had been on the run for too long,
Chasing life and being chased by life,
Tired with a sweaty mind, I long,
For a sunshine in my darkened life.

Searching, scrambling and screaming,
I plan to head towards the end of the world,
Travelling places has been my goal,
To wade off my miseries in the cold.

I came here with a mission to accomplish,
But as days passed the mission faded,
Losing all and everybody as I survived,
The fire in my heart tumbled.

Still having the so called ‘Go’,
I still wonder why I am here,
Looking out for a heart to take me,
To cuddle and fill me with warmth,
I roam around this mundane planet.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is the reflection of my thoughts. Got a bit inspired by Oasis's wonderwall and Greenday's Boulevard of Broken Dreams. Just started thinking a lot on where I should go and what I should do. Seems like this is one of the best ways to release my capped emotions.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Treassa (203.91.193.5) -- Thursday, March 16 2006, 03:59 am

Phew!!

u r so complicated..and yet so simple.....!!!
Aravind (81.171.174.134) -- Thursday, March 16 2006, 09:26 am

Great da

I believe that your style is infact increasing day by day and the flair of words is fantastic
Sweetvenom (47.251.0.13) -- Thursday, March 16 2006, 03:36 pm

Thanks Guys

Thanks Guys for your comments
Please read
That things a lot and works without a pain
in the first para last line as
That thinks a lot and works without a pain.
Sorry for the typo.
Regards
Sweetvenom
Phantom (24.190.0.105) -- Monday, March 20 2006, 11:56 am

Good one

A very big change in the style and use of words, which is good infact. Made me think what keeps me going.
kowsalya (59.92.53.52) -- Monday, March 20 2006, 04:15 pm

good one

reflects ur state of mind
Aarthi (47.251.0.13) -- Monday, March 20 2006, 07:05 pm

good one

The poem was too good. I have no words to explain the goodness of Ur poem. Keep up the good work.
 
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