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One Stormy Day On An Irish Summer
Author: SweetVenom

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Gale winds blowing at a high speed,
Pushing me forward with a huge thrust,
With gentle drizzle fearing to wet the earth,
The trees sway to an unheard 'Rock & Roll'.

With dark clouds flocking towards the North,
Strewn leaves and flowers fly around,
Birds rushing to their nests, chirping aloud,
To escape from the thunder that roars loud.

Dawn shy to remove her veil,
Dusk hesitating to cover the sky,
Mesmerized by this natural quandary,
A lost crow caws, frantically from a tree.

Rain blending with the wind,
Blows in a musical tantrum,
Rolling, rotating and changing sides,
As it is guided by the storm.

Waves leaping new heights,
Water filling the beaches,
And kiss the land they always loved,
While the wet earth throws an aphrodisiac in the air.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is what it was in Ireland a few days back. I liked this weather and it changes every day and sometimes even within a day :). When I did mention it to few of my colleagues, they were amazed and even called it peculiar to like this weather. Hailing from the sub-continent, where the sun shines all 365 days and sets near to 6PM, I really enjoy this change.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Catyrose (128.123.220.90) -- Tuesday, May 23 2006, 06:32 am

Your description

is awesome. These words you have written appeal to all the senses. Almost felt like I was there. right now in the sweltering heat, I'd prefer to be in this breathtaking scene/land you have painted :)
saranya (202.65.155.99) -- Tuesday, May 23 2006, 07:53 am

its not ireland,its awesome land................!

wowwwwwwwww! what a place it is really!i feel to come away and stay there!the land is pleasent unlike the land here!words are really not enough to describe the happiness i felt when i was reading the poem! wowwwwwwww! simply superb! so sweetttttttttttt!
Sweetvenom (47.251.0.13) -- Tuesday, May 23 2006, 03:34 pm

Thanks Caty & Saranya!

Thanx for ur wonderful comments. Happy to hear what they did to know. :) CR: This is the reality here. But people here are tired of the weather.
It rains almost everyday.Wish the effects of global warming doesn't do more damage to this lovely place. This cud be a great summer get-away if one could find a steady summer job here :)
Phantom (47.234.0.53) -- Tuesday, May 23 2006, 07:27 pm

good one

It did took me to ireland !!
Divya Jawali (59.92.193.128) -- Wednesday, May 24 2006, 04:02 am

Stupendous!!!!!!!!!!!!

It is such a lovely poem and it picturizes ireland i guess.. Lures me to come and see ireland ...Beautifully put across...I loved it very much...Good job sweetvenom ...Way to go!!!!
Arrun (192.168.172.42) -- Wednesday, May 24 2006, 09:23 am

Too gud to be praised...

Gud da...i have started to write mails.......which r long enough tat ppl r nt gettin time to read....i have started to write abt facts..and u have started to write gud poems.keep it up.
Revathy (192.168.16.132) -- Wednesday, May 24 2006, 02:02 pm

i wish i cud ever weave words as beautifully as u

wht a fundu thot process u ave da.... i can never describe the mysterious yet enchantin' secrets of mother nature in such simple n strikin' bunch of words!! truly a rivetin' piece of work.... :)
kowsalya (59.92.44.65) -- Monday, May 29 2006, 05:41 pm

too good !!

hey
that was a real good one da...
Aarthi Rajan (47.251.0.13) -- Tuesday, May 30 2006, 12:42 pm

Beautiful

Too good I read the poem and I feel like I am experiencing it already. The poem is too realistic. We don't read the poem we feel it.
Sweetvenom (47.251.0.13) -- Tuesday, June 6 2006, 05:34 pm

Thanks to all of you!

Thanks a lot to all of you! Excited to know that you all liked this poem.Thanks a lot for your comments!
 
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