Consummated Love
Author: SweetVenom


'Rolling off' on the hay,
You on me and me on you,
As sides rotate, the love springs alive,
Sitting on me, looking down, I got lost,
On your cute smile, hidden among those long hairs.

Will plain kisses suffice my love for you?
Your love marks on me seem to last forever,
While I take revenge to bite mine along your neck,
My bite causes pain on my heart,
Hurting you, baby, hurts me.

As we do change sides playing topsy-turvy,
I recognize the mood-changes in you,
I feel miserable to turn you ‘on’,
Should each date of ours consummate?
Afraid to lose your innocence, I hold on.

Prolific romance starts off in a jiffy,
Sweet short kisses all over your body,
Increased heart beats as I touch your hips,
Love handles exposed to lips,
Are we not able to resist but get dirty?

Is ‘dirty’ a right word to use for the hearts that love,
Does love have any physical restriction, with,
Boundaries drawn on what to and what not to do,
Lying on your tender lap, gazing at the sky, I think,
Lust starts after love but love stays even after lust.


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anonymous ( -- Thursday, July 27 2006, 01:38 pm


A good one with an awesome line at the end...
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