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Thankyou God
Author: Angel Laney

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I've never been alone, cuz God is on my side
He helps me to be brave, so never do I hide
When I'm lost and don't know what to say
All I do is cry
And when I am done, And my eyes are dry,
I pray and pray with all my might
That God helps me make it through one more night
God, I say, you are so grand!
Thankyou for your love and helping me to understand
That I need to be patient, cuz soon enough
All the pain will be gone, but never the love

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.211.32) -- Wednesday, October 1 2003, 08:36 pm

beautiful job Angel.......

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!!.......i really like this, i know the feeling of this "thank you prayer" too well...thanx for sharing it w/us sweetie
Dad (209.165.34.233) -- Wednesday, October 1 2003, 10:50 pm

Angel, never the love.......

Angel, I do agree with Terrie*. Beautiful, beautiful job!! It's true that we need to turn to God for help he is ready to give if we but ask. That last line, "All the pain will be gone, but never the love" is Sooooo good an ending, too. I can relate to this, and I LOVE it! You are goooooood!!! I will be looking forward to more of your writing!! Thanks, Dad
Angel Laney (198.81.26.79) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 11:55 pm

Thank you

Thank you Terrie. I've been doing A LOT of reflecting lately, and I'm going through some things. It helps to know other people feel the same way.
Angel Laney (198.81.26.79) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 11:56 pm

Hey Dad

Thank you Dad! I hope you are doing well. I miss you!
Leah (66.222.217.200) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 07:06 am

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Hey Angel I was looking through the titles of the poems and this one caught my eye because I recently posted a poem with the exact same title! Sweet poem. You are blessed with an awesome writing dad.....
 
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