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My Name Is Angel Dawn Laney
Author: Angel Laney

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My name is Angel Dawn Laney-
Forever loving and a little crazy.
I'm strong willed, and fascinating.
I'm the little sister of Jennifer,
who is the bearer of great mistakes and strength.
Younger sister of Benjamin, my father's first son.
Sister of Jamin, humorous who has love in waves.
Sister of Reagan, gentle and always young.
Sister of Joey, sensitive with a heart of gold.
Sister of Dylan, beautiful, giving, and bold.
Sister of Zimmerman, sweet and sincere.
I am a lover of faith, passion, and tear.
I feel great compassion for those in pain,
Who needs constant guidance, to keep me sane.
I give my soul, my heart, my all, to fight to protect
All that is precious to me.
I fear secrets, bars, deaths, and going crazy.
I would like to see a world of peace
Where all creatures lived in harmony
Without fear, worries, or grief.
I live within myself, my home is where the hearts of
Everyone dear to me are beating.
My name is Angel Dawn Laney.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.213.33) -- Saturday, September 27 2003, 03:19 pm

Beautiful .......

This is absolutely beautiful...thank you for sharing a lil bit of yourself w/us....
MartinV (171.75.207.206) -- Saturday, September 27 2003, 05:46 pm

Such Sincerity!

Angel,

You definitely, have your own, beautiful and poetic style, but I sense a little of the "Ben Touch," in this one, love, humor, honesty, self-respect and respect for othres. This is very refreshing and you express yourself, very well.

Now, I going to go read another of Angel's poems, these are so, beautiful.

Thanks Angel,

MartinV
Dad (67.113.56.150) -- Monday, September 29 2003, 09:52 pm

aka/ Catfish this is too.........

Angel, aka Catfish, this is too much, this poem! You have done more than just create poetry here. You have from your own heart and mind created a family treasure for yourself and your siblings that will stand as a testament for all time. In it you share your feelings for your brothers and sisters, and more of your own soul in a pure poetic fashion. I commend you, girl, for your straight forward, unpretentious expression. I get the feeling from your writing that you are going to touch and inspire many souls along the way, and be appreciated for the artist you are! I also thank you for being brave and generous in sharing your talent with others. You do not cease to amaze and suprise me!
Thanks again, Dad
Angel Laney (198.81.26.75) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 11:58 pm

Hi Terrie

Thank you Terrie. No problem. I always like to share. :)
Angel Laney (198.81.26.75) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 12:00 am

Hi Martin

Thank you Martin. To be compared to my Dad is an awesome compliment. You are so kind!!!!
Dylan (209.209.93.21) -- Monday, November 24 2003, 06:33 pm

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Angel,
This is such a beautiful poem. I've got tears in my eyes; it's so touching. I love you sis!
 
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