I Need You If You...
I need you if you trust me,
so blindly that you believe my words,
so strongly that I wouldn't lie to you,
so truely that you are the one I confide.
I need you beside if you love me,
so purely that I don't disagree you,
so closely that you are always near me,
so humbly that you respect my loved ones.
I need you if we have differences that are,
so wide that you are not my alter-ego,
so miniscule that we have same wavelength,
so affectionate that we respect our tastes.
I need you because I trust you,
as much as I love myself,
cause if I hadn't met you,
There would have been nothing worthwhile in my life.
I need you since only you can stay with me,
when failures hit me wild,
when people judge me wrong,
Only you can boost my confidence.
I need you as I don't want to lose you,
It is the adaptability that counts,
And we can strive to make each-other happy,
And sail the life with lots of love.
------- Author's Notes -------
This could be yet another simple love poem from me but this one is going to be very special. I would definitely give it to HER when I meet her. It is very difficult to tell someone, I want to grow old with you but once you feel what you did it right, I believe there is no looking back. :).Cheers!
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Terrie* (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, January 5 2007, 02:09 am|
S.V, i cain sooooo feel you in this...this is one absolute outstandin' write, your heart shines through this one sweetie, that is what makes it so special, there's no goin' wrong when we apply our true self and our whole heart of our bein' in our wants and desires of what we want to share in a life time partner, lover, companion, soulmate,confidant , oh yes to feel what you feel, is soooo right , to grow with someone.... trust me , it cain be sooo real , God allowed me to touch that feelin' once before he called him away..keep your heart close by....ubtil you meet her...my best to you for a lifetime of happiness...thank you for sharin'..
|Sweetvenom (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, January 5 2007, 11:44 am|
Terrie*-Good to see you back!You know what,when I posted this poem, I did bet myself, that you will go thro' this-coz it was in one of ur categories.:)-- It is good when you are in love-waiting for and get the best rather than falling for something little less...I hope I don't die young before I meet or get someone who fits me right :)..She may be near but still we may not know..Terrie,Sorry to know ab the loss, but those moments though are for a short time can be cherised for a life time but still God should have given ample time..:(.. Enjoy your day with the feelings left behind.Once again thanks a lot for your comments.It really made me smile!:)
|Shravan (18.104.22.168) -- Friday, January 5 2007, 02:27 pm|
Bro a real gem man ! You can keep it coming and still give me the feeling you will never ever run out of steam ! Hope you find the one you are looking for,ever so soon. And of course sail the life with her for the reat of your LONG life ! cheers !
|barb (22.214.171.124) -- Friday, January 5 2007, 08:11 pm|
No mention of bodily pleasures just pure love this is talent and so nice. thanks for a good read
|Terrie* (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, January 5 2007, 08:52 pm|
it's been 16 years, those sweet memories of him will forever live w/me until my last breath....1st loves are never forgotten..your words tapped closer to the chambers of my souls heart..it's a sweet pleasure reminiscin' with those thoughts...and touchin' those fuzzy memorable feelin's..keep the thoughts of your heart and soul together as you have, and give birth to many more Glorious writes to share.
God Bless You..
|Sweetevenom (188.8.131.52) -- Saturday, January 6 2007, 12:18 am|
Thanx Barb-Yep this is only for the heart and mind..:).Thanks for your comments/
Thanks a lot Terrie*-Your writes are glorious and brings in good feelings too..Thanks for ur comments.
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