vinebar

Forever Again
Author: Shan

vinebar

Here I am, once again
In your hands, at the end
You say, lets stay here
stay this way, remain friends
Let it rain, let it pour
Let me knock at your door
I can feel, keep this real
Bless this moment once more
Because here I am, once again
In your hands, at the end
Make right now last forever
And ever again

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Bipedalguy (4.156.51.99) -- Wednesday, January 10 2007, 05:18 am

I like it.

You use "again" 3 times, but it works very well.
Bip
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Shan

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.