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I Know A Soul
Author: Angel Laney

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I know a soul who is as golden as the sun when it melts
into the ocean at the day's nearing end.

I know a spirit who is brave and strong, eagerly
waiting to take flight against any wind.

I know an angelic creature who patiently climbs every rock,
and scales each mountain with a radiant smile and a tangible glow.

I know an inspiring human being who appears delicate, but holds within
herself an invincible magic, that she's learned how to control.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is dedicated to my little sister Dylan Laney.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben Laney (64.172.131.159) -- Saturday, September 27 2003, 08:02 am

I know a poem, Angel......

I know a poem, Angel when I read one. This IS pure poetry! This writing is alive! Your imagery is vivid and sharp. It is strong from the first line to the last. This has a straight forward force within it, clearly presented, that reveals not only your heart but also a source of inspiration, another soul. It also expresses an appreciation of that other human being's characteristics and qualities in such a beautiful way. It is amazing to me how much you said with so few well chosen words. This is outstanding, original work that shines. As I keep re-reading I love it more each time! The best thing I see in this? I see your love in every line. I also see your courage and talent radiating. I'd say, "You go, Girl", but I see you're already gone!! Ha! Ha! Haaa! And just as sure as I am crazy, crazy, crazy this poem will be deep in my soul forever! I LOVE IT! It is excellent writing. Please, keep up the good work!! Love, Dad
Angel Laney (198.81.26.79) -- Saturday, September 27 2003, 02:14 pm

Hey Dad

Thanks Dad! That's really sweet of you. I'm glad you like it!
Terrie* (65.148.213.33) -- Saturday, September 27 2003, 03:02 pm

excellent....Angel...

This is one of the sweetest sisterly poems that i have come across in a very long time..thanx for sharing..share some more..
ashley nb (12.223.235.93) -- Saturday, September 27 2003, 09:32 pm

great

i loved it! keep up the great work. it was truly sentimental and emotional.
Angel Laney (198.81.26.141) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 12:05 am

Hey Terrie

Thank you and your very welcome!!!
Angel Laney (198.81.26.141) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 12:06 am

Hi ashley nb

Thank you!!! Yes, this poem is very special. My sister and I are very close.
Dylan Laney (209.209.93.21) -- Monday, November 24 2003, 06:49 pm

Thank you Angel

This poem is so precious and sincere. This is the nicest thing anybody has ever done for me. It means a lot to me that you can express your love for me, along with your opinion of me, to the public. Though I could never express my love through words for you as well as you have for me, I do love you. You are and will forever be my best friend. Thank you for the poem and for being the best sister a girl could ever have.
Paige (138.130.209.114) -- Monday, April 18 2005, 09:02 am

Your an expert

That really sounds like an really proffesional poem Ican't beleive you actually wrote that Well done
Paige (138.130.209.114) -- Monday, April 18 2005, 09:05 am

Still claping

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Well done!
Paige (138.130.209.114) -- Monday, April 18 2005, 09:05 am

Still claping

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Well done!
 
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