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Deal
Author: Angel Laney

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This is a poem that is dedicated to anyone who can relate.


You try so hard, in such a wrong way.
But where do you start to deal
With this kind of pain, anyway?
No one knows, no one ever knew.
Seems like nothin's ever right,
No matter what you do.
It's a hard battle to fight,
And you're scared to lose

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben Laney (64.172.131.159) -- Saturday, September 27 2003, 08:51 am

Angel, I am one of those.......

Angel, I am one of those who can relate to this poem, and I'm happy to be amoung those whom it is dedicated to. Thank you! Again a poem with few words that speak so much. Plainly describing some inner agony common to many human beings. I have experienced these feelings. This also goes strong from start to finish, but the subject matter makes me glad it wasn't longer! Ha! Ha! Ha! Seriously, though,it does express some of the tough things we go through as human beings. Good, good job! I do think I am becoming a fan of your work! Keep writing! Love, Dad
Aun-T* (65.148.232.203) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 05:54 pm

LOVELY DEDICATION ANGEL...

your poetry is so rich in words..i just love.....the way that you express yourself..i do not know how i missed reading this one..i'm glad i came back..thank you for dedicating such an extra gifted poem.....i'll be waiting for more...i'm glad your dad directed you to this sight, just think of all those perfect poems that we would of missed out on.....Aun-T*
 
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