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Beauty By Heart
13 February, 2007
Author: SweetVenom

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Nothing against anyone,
Just simple love and care,
Affinity toward humanity,
and tears for others pain.

Soft-spoken, humble and honest,
All in one cozy nest,
enveloped deep inside,
And that is what I call 'Beauty by Heart'.

Beauty is skin deep,
Shrinking with age,
Wrinkles all over turn into flakes,
And dries off in heat and cold.

Living beautiful is being true,
To oneself and to others,
With divinity and dignity,
That lives till the last breathe.

Hair falls, Ethics never fail,
Skin itches, Hearts never lie,
I Love you for what you are,
rather than how you look.
I love you for your heart,
Coz you are a 'beauty by Heart'.

------- Author's Notes -------

Thought of writing it different but it came out totally unexpected. As you all know, it is what the mind feels that hands pen,I'm sharing what I felt. Hope you enjoy.Will try to pen what I exactly wanted to write some other time :).

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (66.81.131.217) -- Wednesday, February 14 2007, 02:16 am

Awwww, this is Profound....

Sweet,this is written as true and as real as a heart cain express.... the heart is where true friendships start ...a in society a pic creates a wall from knowin' a persons heart, soul or spirit..their too fixed on the exterior rather that the interior..when you see and feel a heart you cain see it all...great write ..i LOVED it...
Meridian (64.12.116.142) -- Thursday, February 15 2007, 05:21 am

The venom is sweet

SV, In stanza 3 of Beauty By Heart, I couldn't help but imagine what I would look like at 60 or 70; that is, if I live to see it. Father Time has a lot of suprises waiting for us in the future concerning our bodies. We'll just have to wait and see, won't we? LOL.

Superb poem!
Sweetvenom (47.251.0.12) -- Thursday, February 15 2007, 11:44 am

Thanks Terrie*, Thanks Meridian!

This was written for the heart but we can't just resisit the beauty the eyes see.Though we can never compare the beauty of the feel and vision, it is still the 'Beauty by Heart' that is long-lived and pleasant too.Felt people around me gave too much to their external factors so I felt I need to write on what I felt.
Thanks for your thoughts.. :)
kritz (122.164.141.192) -- Monday, February 26 2007, 11:08 am

sweet poison

If the Venom is this sweet every one wud like to have it ya! Thanks for the sweet venom! It tastes better than sugar!I call this as Beautiful love~!Wow! words are not enough to describe one should feel it!Fabulous!
Pen or Sword (65.57.245.11) -- Tuesday, March 27 2007, 01:04 pm

Beauty of brain

Wow..really the most bitter that turned to sweet.,keep it up!
 
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